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How to Write a Law School Personal Statement

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Times have changed. Law schools are well aware of the dismal job market, and they want to make sure you know what you're getting yourself into by applying. It's important that you convey in your personal statement that you've carefully weighed the benefits and drawbacks before applying. Your entire essay shouldn't be about the law, and it shouldn't all be about why you want to go to law school, but the experiences you choose to share should lead into why you believe you have the attributes, characteristics, and affinity for the legal profession.

[Get more Law School Personal Statement Tips.]

Here are some common myths:

I should start with something really dramatic.

Please don't. Lawyers don't write that way. You should worry less about shocking the reader and more about quickly piquing the reader's interest. Berkeley Law just posted a great example of what admissions committee members really think when you start your personal statement with a melodramatic tale. This is a must-read no matter where you are applying.

Rather than trying to seek an emotional reaction, begin your personal statement with something honest and insightful. Two of my clients got into Harvard Law this week; neither started with an overly dramatic anecdote, quote, or attention-getting device. They opened with an honest statement about what matters to them, and then they told stories that supported that statement, and why that theme drew them to law school.

[See six mistakes people make in law school personal statements.]

I have nothing to write about because of my upper-middle class upbringing.

If everyone could write a story about growing up impoverished and disadvantaged, there would be nothing remarkable about those sample essays often included in books. Think about what has motivated you to make the choices you've made for your life. Think about what is important to you. Show that you really think about things, that there are things that really matter to you. Don't apologize for your privileged upbringing, but also don't emphasize it by talking about the trip to Africa you took with your parents when you were seven and how seeing poverty there changed your life. Actually, I take it back. You can write about this so long as this takes up no more than three sentences of your essay and the rest is all about the non-profit you started in college to feed starving people and fund schools in Africa. You can write about seemingly mundane things like your pre-law organization or your retail job, but make it relevant by talking about the issues that arose and dilemmas you solved.

[Learn how to conclude your personal statement .]

I have a great personal statement because nothing has ever gone right in my life.

Oftentimes, the people who really have stories to share about growing up disadvantaged are the same people who have trouble really showing how they overcame those obstacles. These stories are really only powerful if you can show you turned things around.

I should pick an area of law practice I intend to pursue.

You don't need to decide upon your area of specialization in law. In fact, I urge people to shy away from declaring exactly what kind of law they hope to practice except in very limited circumstances (for example, someone who is already a patent agent and wants to be an intellectual property law attorney). See Anna Ivey's post, which perfectly captures my sentiments about the emerging trend of being interested in international law.

[Get more tips and tricks for personal statements by the University of Chicago School of Law.]

Another reason not to pick an area of law is that you should use law school to explore what areas are "hot" and employable. (See my most recent blog talk radio show, How to Get Hired as a Rookie Attorney.)

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These are all excellent comments, although I do believe that a powerful personal story, if it truly led you to pursue a legal career, can be an effective way to begin your personal statement. The major weakness I am seeing in the law school personal statements I receive is a lack of a specific answer to the question, "Why law?" Many applicants talk about their desire for intellectual challenge, power to help others and ability to support their family financially, but these goals can be achieved by politicians, social workers, doctors, teachers, and almost any profession. I'm much more impressed and convinced if you get to the heart of how you will achieve these goals in a legal setting, that is, why the law is right for you and how you are suited to a career in law. I also disagree with the advice to avoid stating a specialization - law is simply too varied a field with too many specializations to avoid naming a few possibilities. Telling me that you want to become a lawyer in order to protect battered children is excellent, but I want to know how you will accomplish this: as a litigator, a judge or a divorce mediator? Dare to be specific and take a stand. For more advice, visit www.thehonesteditor.com.

Jennifer Millman of NY 10:54AM January 30, 2013

I have a Bachelor Degree from Republic of Moldova, 3.5 GPA. Another undergraduate College course and a Pharmacy Technician Certificate achieved in USA. Very poor LSAT score: 137. Speak 3 languages (Russian, Romanian and English) and I have been in USA only for 5 years. Working as a Legal assistant, have work experience as a manager in a restaurant and for another company. Some work experience as an accountant and pharmacy technician. I have a Company in my name (it is true that I haven't done anything since I open it due to the changes in the Department's of State rules). Have a misdemeanor class A in my record (3.5 years ago). Do I have any chances to get into the South Texas College of Law?

Also, If I claim that I am the owner of my company, which is true, do I ruin all my chances to get financial aid? And since there was no financial activities in my company I don't have any other tax forms besides my W4 so will this create a confusion between admission and financial aid decision process?

Thank you very much for your advice and your time!

Ana

Ana of TX 3:51PM January 27, 2013

I'm currently an undergrad student studing law in India. Any thoughts on which is a better bet (for an LLM/PhD)?- Yale , Havard, Columbia & Oxford, Cambridge & LSE. As of now, iv'e still not made up my mind, but am leaning towards public international law/ competition law/ tax laws..

I'm within the top 10 percentile of my batch and hope to remain the same, with a keen interest in mooting .....

If you could also guide me as to what particularly to focus on in my undergrad years, it would be a big help...

Gayatri of NY 11:43AM January 11, 2013

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Ann K. Levine, Esq., is a law school admission consultant and the former director of admissions for two ABA law schools. Since 2004, she has helped thousands gain admission to law school through her consulting company, Law School Expert. She is the author of the bestselling law school guide, The Law School Admission Game: Play Like an Expert. Ms. Levine graduated magna cum laude from the University of Miami School of Law. Got a question? E-mail her at getinlawschool@usnews.com or follow her on Twitter.

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