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How to Write a Law School Personal Statement

December 13, 2010 RSS Feed Print

Times have changed. Law schools are well aware of the dismal job market, and they want to make sure you know what you're getting yourself into by applying. It's important that you convey in your personal statement that you've carefully weighed the benefits and drawbacks before applying. Your entire essay shouldn't be about the law, and it shouldn't all be about why you want to go to law school, but the experiences you choose to share should lead into why you believe you have the attributes, characteristics, and affinity for the legal profession.

[Get more Law School Personal Statement Tips.]

Here are some common myths:

I should start with something really dramatic.

Please don't. Lawyers don't write that way. You should worry less about shocking the reader and more about quickly piquing the reader's interest. Berkeley Law just posted a great example of what admissions committee members really think when you start your personal statement with a melodramatic tale. This is a must-read no matter where you are applying.

Rather than trying to seek an emotional reaction, begin your personal statement with something honest and insightful. Two of my clients got into Harvard Law this week; neither started with an overly dramatic anecdote, quote, or attention-getting device. They opened with an honest statement about what matters to them, and then they told stories that supported that statement, and why that theme drew them to law school.

[See six mistakes people make in law school personal statements.]

I have nothing to write about because of my upper-middle class upbringing.

If everyone could write a story about growing up impoverished and disadvantaged, there would be nothing remarkable about those sample essays often included in books. Think about what has motivated you to make the choices you've made for your life. Think about what is important to you. Show that you really think about things, that there are things that really matter to you. Don't apologize for your privileged upbringing, but also don't emphasize it by talking about the trip to Africa you took with your parents when you were seven and how seeing poverty there changed your life. Actually, I take it back. You can write about this so long as this takes up no more than three sentences of your essay and the rest is all about the non-profit you started in college to feed starving people and fund schools in Africa. You can write about seemingly mundane things like your pre-law organization or your retail job, but make it relevant by talking about the issues that arose and dilemmas you solved.

[Learn how to conclude your personal statement .]

I have a great personal statement because nothing has ever gone right in my life.

Oftentimes, the people who really have stories to share about growing up disadvantaged are the same people who have trouble really showing how they overcame those obstacles. These stories are really only powerful if you can show you turned things around.

I should pick an area of law practice I intend to pursue.

You don't need to decide upon your area of specialization in law. In fact, I urge people to shy away from declaring exactly what kind of law they hope to practice except in very limited circumstances (for example, someone who is already a patent agent and wants to be an intellectual property law attorney). See Anna Ivey's post, which perfectly captures my sentiments about the emerging trend of being interested in international law.

[Get more tips and tricks for personal statements by the University of Chicago School of Law.]

Another reason not to pick an area of law is that you should use law school to explore what areas are "hot" and employable. (See my most recent blog talk radio show, How to Get Hired as a Rookie Attorney.)

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I have a 3.96 undergrad.GPA, and I will probably only do mediocre on the LSAT- 155 is my high in practice, and even if I can bring this up some, I'm assuming -5 or so, simply due to nerves, bad morning, etc. on test day. Furthermore, I am a 32 year old high school drop out; I fell behind 5 years due to the dropping out, and another 5 when, after evacuating for hurricane Katrina, I moved from New Orleans to San Francisco, and worked as a drugstore manager. Also, I am a first generation college student. Oh, and I was arrested 3 or 4 times 10-12 years ago, for DUI and marijuana possession. So, first question: Do I even have a shot at getting into a school such as L.S.U?(#85 or so, median LSAT: 158) and second question: Everything good that I've done has merely been a reaction, to fix what has gone wrong, so how can I mention the good without the bad? Third: Law schools really don't care about retail management careers, do they? Should I detail this career at all?

Matt G of LA 9:41PM July 17, 2011

I thank you for the personal response; I would think long and hard about becoming a lawyer. Many professors in law school and partners in law seem to have a need to make personal attacks. I'm just giving my direct opinion.

To respond to what you said in your post. 1) A good LSAT will make up for a mediocre GPA: Going back to my initial post, I mention a high LSAT 3 times before I mention a high GPA. A high LSAT WILL make up for a mediocre GPA. A high GPA WILL NOT make up for a mediocre LSAT. If you can pull a 175 LSAT, you have a good chance of getting into a T14 regardless of your GPA.

2)Real world experience matters: Yes if you invented facebook, microsoft or another multimillion dollar business, are a celeb, professional athlete, or an olympic medalist, or related to a very important person. If you answered no, then I'm sorry noone cares. I was also in the military and unless you have the numerical creds, it wont matter.

While in the real world, highschool drop-outs make it big everday, law school is not the real world. For law school its LSAT> LSAT> LSAT> GPA...everything else on the margins.

I don't have a blog, book to sale or buisness to run. I have no incentive to provide anything but my honest opinion. My opinion is that in law school admissions, nothing but LSAT and GPA really matters. I'm always open to change my mind if the evidence leads me. Sadly, I have never seen any evidence to lead me to the conclusion that I am incorrect.

Pheigs secrets of VA 11:05AM December 17, 2010

alot of people turn their lives around, with low gpa's or lsats, apply to law school. and do great.... That doesnt even take into account all the people that get military/work experience after school.... in those cases the resume means everything.

GPA and LSAT scores are the main factors, yes.... but if you ace the lsat and have a mediocre gpa, schools will still take you. not to mention if you have real world experience to offer, like if you have your own business or served as an officer (leadership) in the military.

you should consider using you brain before you spew your useless, oversimplified thoughts to the world.... The world isn't black and white. get over yourself.....

Brandon of CA 5:11AM December 17, 2010

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Ann K. Levine, Esq., is a law school admission consultant and the former director of admissions for two ABA law schools. Since 2004, she has helped thousands gain admission to law school through her consulting company, Law School Expert. She is the author of the bestselling law school guide, The Law School Admission Game: Play Like an Expert. Ms. Levine graduated magna cum laude from the University of Miami School of Law. Got a question? E-mail her at getinlawschool@usnews.com or follow her on Twitter.

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